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Broken

Shattered without hope
Fixed without meaning
Lost in your body
A mind so helpless
A body so fragile
She's badly broken
There's nothing wrong with her body
But her soul is broken
She is broken
No tears will fall down that face
But no smiles will shine through
A longing to fix her but knowing you cant
A broken soul you see walk past you everyday
Not known broken to the rest of the world
Known only broken to herself
Shattered without hope
Every now and then the cracks are seen
The cracks in her soul growing deeper and deeper
Someone save

                     HER!!!
©2006-2009 ~Gothicluva
:icongothicluva:

Author's Comments

Someone pleaze save me frm myself n society :-(


Mood: invisibly dead

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:icondyingwithoutme:
Wow, powerfull lines.
Sad, but really good.

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sometimes goodbye is the only way !
:icongothicluva:
thanx dude :-)

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Y have u forsaken me in ur eyes,thoughts and hearts leavin me 2 drown in a pool of my depression.....


R<3K... 4eva
:icondyingwithoutme:
My pleasure. (;

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sometimes goodbye is the only way !
:iconpinkstar07:
neat poem. I like it.

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